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The moon rose slowly, full and bright,
Over the forest that fateful night.
Not a creature stirred, not a rustle of leaves,
Apart from a lone figure, stood beneath the trees.
It began to move, silent and cold,
As the chill from the wind took its hold.
It stepped into the moonlight, then stood still,
Collapsed to the ground as though it were ill.
It looked to the moon, and the light hit its face,
Her skin was pure white and delicate as lace.
Long black hair reached down her back,
In her eyes she was lost, so far off track.
A single tear rolled down her soft cheek,
For she knew that her prospects were bleak.
She knew she was lost, but not in the woods,
But in the life she had eternally withstood.
Now enough was enough, she couldn’t take anymore,
Blade in hand, another tear hit the floor.
Handle clasped tight held to her chest,
She knew what was about to be done, was for the best.
She took one last moment to look around,
And prepared herself for the fate she was bound.



Now if you enter the forest when the moons full and bright,
You will be guided through the forest at night.
To the place where she died, where her blood was shed,
Where her life departed, and her soul fled.
But you won’t see anything, the grounds remains bare,
Almost as if nothing happened there.
But you were drawn to that spot by the way the wind blows,
Because she will forever be…..

The Moonlight Shadow
©2004-2010 ~hippified-goth
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Author's Comments

Well i have to give most the credit to she gave me the inspiration and also the picture is hers aswell (the one that inspired me) . So thankyou chix0r
anyway is a poem!!

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:iconenjoy-the-silence:
Ooooh, cool. It makes me think of the old ghost legends and it's just in time for Hallowe'en. ;p
:iconhippified-goth:
Ooh i didn't think of that, your right hehehe.

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:iconenjoy-the-silence:
lol - awwwwwwww, how sweet! :D :glomp:
:iconsekhmankh:
Where do I begin with the cool! I loved it, so tragic and beautiful... and the picture is beautiful... I must go comment to the artist now... that was awesome :headbang: :dance: :boogie:

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:iconhippified-goth:
thankyou, i love your avatar by the way.

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Merry we meet
Merry we part
And merry shall we meet again
Blessed be
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

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:iconchix0r:
absolutely beautiful :heart: such lovely words that put a story behind my work, I couldnt have created a more perfect representation hun, well done!

how sweet of you to credit me with the inspiration behind this piece, I am flattered!

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:iconhippified-goth:
You should be, i have found myself less and less easily inspired of late, so it is a great feat, but i'm not supprised with the quality of your work.

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Merry we meet
Merry we part
And merry shall we meet again
Blessed be
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:iconchix0r:
thank you :hug:

I hope that I can continue to inspire :heart:

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:iconhippified-goth:
I'm sure you will :glomp:

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Merry we meet
Merry we part
And merry shall we meet again
Blessed be
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